Night Time Light Show
Nonet contest16 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks an experience of viewing a night time light show of colour and light glow in the forest; well written, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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This speaks an experience of viewing a night time light show of colour and light glow in the forest; well written, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thank you
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Magic Dragon. Very nice. Very good. Very cute. Good alliteration within. Great Nonet format, syllable count, photo choice, and imagery within. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Hello Magic Dragon. Very nice. Very good. Very cute. Good alliteration within. Great Nonet format, syllable count, photo choice, and imagery within. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 11-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Comment from Alexander Vasa
Lovely imagery of the fireflies and your poem makes a nice shape on the page. It compliments the great artwork you've, which suits the poem so well. I noticed no errors, thanks for this lovely work to review. Ana.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Lovely imagery of the fireflies and your poem makes a nice shape on the page. It compliments the great artwork you've, which suits the poem so well. I noticed no errors, thanks for this lovely work to review. Ana.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thank you
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A stunning image and captivating nonet poem.
Very well presented and has a very smooth flow from line to line.
Descriptive language adds to the depth of meaning.
In my area we have glow worms and they are so beautiful when viewed at night-quite similar to your description of the fireflies.
Good luck.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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A stunning image and captivating nonet poem.
Very well presented and has a very smooth flow from line to line.
Descriptive language adds to the depth of meaning.
In my area we have glow worms and they are so beautiful when viewed at night-quite similar to your description of the fireflies.
Good luck.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never seen fireflies and it must be a spectacular sight, your poem has brought the experience to life for me, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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I have never seen fireflies and it must be a spectacular sight, your poem has brought the experience to life for me, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Comment from Gloria ....
Hi MD. Great nonet filled with fantastic imagery. And you have an almost perfect inverted isosceles triangle, so WELL done. The only word that needs lengthening is captivating. Have you tried "it's riveting" or "it's delightful"? Or something like that. A very easy repair for you to make a perfect nonet.
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Hi MD. Great nonet filled with fantastic imagery. And you have an almost perfect inverted isosceles triangle, so WELL done. The only word that needs lengthening is captivating. Have you tried "it's riveting" or "it's delightful"? Or something like that. A very easy repair for you to make a perfect nonet.
Great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you