Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Oh, a party time paradox. This is terrific, Bill. Psychedelic, which life really is on the cellular level and alone, together. lol

A wonderful lune and I wish you the best in the contest.

Gloria

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks, Gloria.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

When you look like that, you should be alone. Anyone who looks like that could scare King Kong, Godzilla and the Cyclops. He could get a job standing outside a Doctor's office making passersby sick, ugh.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks, nomi, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I like this very clever entry in this lune poetry contest Bill. Yes indeed this single cell from which evolutionists would say creation's springboard (but where did the amoeba come from?)great entry my friend, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you, Roy.

reply by royowen on 29-Jan-2018

Welcome Bill

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Bill.

These little writes are getting way more sophisticated in my humble opinion. I loved the play on words in this one. Still solo after all these years is your amoeba! Great skill in this one and good luck. xoxo Kiwi

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks, Kiwi.

reply by kiwigirl2821 on 29-Jan-2018

totally welcome Bill. :) debs

Comment from Natalie Walker

Excellent

This is a nice lune poem. I'd never really pictured an amoeba as anything beautiful, but this poem brings out the beauty in it.

I didn't notice any errors or typos.

Nice work!

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks, Natalie.

Comment from James H. Oldfield

Excellent

I love the final line :)

Another very good one, I like the idea behind these works (poems around a single specific subject, rather than just amoeba generally :) ).

Great job, and take care.

-James

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you, James.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a Line Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks, Ricky.