Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Lanturne Poetry writing prompt.
Well said, and still keeping within your theme.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks, Sharon.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill,
Good job with this Lanturne. Clever use of construction with a hidden message. You are getting very good at this Amoeba thing. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you, Marilyn, for the nice review. Bill

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute Lanturne poem about the Moeba. You used very good and cute wording with very good imagery from the art work. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Ew, gross. It's eating a bug. I agree with the bug... no way amoebas would get big enough to eat an insect. This must be the Godzilla of amoebadom. :)

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Sure, he's one-celled, but what a cell! Thanks, Phyllis, for taking a peek. Bill

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a one-celled animal amoeba can be tougher than man sometime; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks, ALD, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

Interesting use of incorporating an acrostic in the brief 5 lines of the lanturne poem and giving the amoeba the name Moe. Witty, meets requirements of this contest. Good luck

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thank you, mv, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

This is fitting. Between the three stoggies, it's doubtful that there was a one-celled brain. I'm kidding of course. They were comedic geniuses whose films still hold up well.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks, Thomas, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. You used all the syllables to give attitude to the Amoeba, named Moe. And at the same time you bring to the reader's attention that the poem also contains the word Amoeba, itself.

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks for giving this a look.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

It's about time the happy amoeba had it's own poem. Execellent lanturne form that reminds the reader of the importance of the amoeba. Your words bring me back to my high school biology classes.

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018

Thanks for giving this protozoan a peek.

reply by mermaids on 26-Jan-2018

My pleasure. I am always interested in the smallest of creatures.