Herald of Spring
Lune: Contest Entry30 total reviews
Comment from Zue65
Yes, with a robin's song spring cannot be far behind. Your poem explored that theme perfectly in this Lune poem. The picture also complements well the message and the description intended by the author. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Yes, with a robin's song spring cannot be far behind. Your poem explored that theme perfectly in this Lune poem. The picture also complements well the message and the description intended by the author. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Hello!
Thank you for your thoughtful review!
Think spring!
diane
Comment from Janet Foor
Being from northwest Pennsylvania, I understand the sound of a robin's song signals the end of winter and herald Spring, life and rebirth.
Very nicely done Lune poem.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Being from northwest Pennsylvania, I understand the sound of a robin's song signals the end of winter and herald Spring, life and rebirth.
Very nicely done Lune poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Hello Janet!
So pleased you enjoyed!
diane
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Mrs KT. How nice is this lune Yes the robyn songs in spring a lovely sound and bird you capture the roby well in this poem Good luck with the contest Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Hi Mrs KT. How nice is this lune Yes the robyn songs in spring a lovely sound and bird you capture the roby well in this poem Good luck with the contest Cheers Christine
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Hello Christine!
So pleased you enjoyed!
diane
Comment from Dumbledor
It is great to read such a lovely verse, so simply said but capturing the senses and imagination. Framed by a very apt, and lovely photo. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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It is great to read such a lovely verse, so simply said but capturing the senses and imagination. Framed by a very apt, and lovely photo. Nicely done.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Hello!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from misscookie
The artwork you choose for your poem is not only a perfect match
it is beautiful
Your words are so smooth and crystal clear I can't wait until spring returns
Cookie
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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The artwork you choose for your poem is not only a perfect match
it is beautiful
Your words are so smooth and crystal clear I can't wait until spring returns
Cookie
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Hi Cookie!
So pleased you enjoyed!
diane
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Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Oh I hear you I simply cannot with for the joys and freedom of spring and summer! Spring is my favorite season this is a beautiful poem well done so well written kindest regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Oh I hear you I simply cannot with for the joys and freedom of spring and summer! Spring is my favorite season this is a beautiful poem well done so well written kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello!
Thank you for your thoughtful review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lune. The first bird songs after winter is the most beautiful sound we waited for the whole winter. It means Spring is on the way. Winter is finally starting to fade.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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A very well-written Lune. The first bird songs after winter is the most beautiful sound we waited for the whole winter. It means Spring is on the way. Winter is finally starting to fade.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello Sandra!
So pleased you enjoyed my lune!
C?mon spring!
Diane
Comment from zanya
Oh yes finally winter may be losing its long, icy grip - celebrated here in this Lune with a reminder of one of classical heralds - 'the robin's song'- and a lovely pic
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Oh yes finally winter may be losing its long, icy grip - celebrated here in this Lune with a reminder of one of classical heralds - 'the robin's song'- and a lovely pic
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello!
I hope winter is on its way out; I am ready for spring!
Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Boogienights
I've read a lot of poems lately about birds...and I love it! Birds are my favorite.I
Iive In minnesota so we won't be hearing robins for awhile:( Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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I've read a lot of poems lately about birds...and I love it! Birds are my favorite.I
Iive In minnesota so we won't be hearing robins for awhile:( Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello!
Much appreciation for your kind review. They'll be there pretty soon; I promise!
Comment from robina1978
An excellent photo of a robin that complements your poem very well. You taught me something, I did not know that this makes spring start. Dot on syllable count. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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An excellent photo of a robin that complements your poem very well. You taught me something, I did not know that this makes spring start. Dot on syllable count. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Hello!
Well, robins herald spring for many Michiganders, but there are a number of other heralds as well: mostly warmer weather! :)
Thank you for your kind review!