Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

It's a little humorous, funny but amoeba does not know, we can read them and find their zodiac sign to know about their future action; wish you good luck for the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks, ALD

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt.
Well written with so few words. Cute.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks, Sharon.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very well written and very cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You always come up with really neat things to write about! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

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 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Dang git, Bill, you made me spit coffee across my screen. You have such a rare gift of humor. I don't know whether the judges like to pour humor on top of their bowlsful of Haiku, but that's their loss. I love it. Wish I had a six for it. Now to go get a paper towel.

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 Comment Written 12-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018

Your very kind, Jay. I was looking for an amoeba in mitosis for the Gemini picture.