Footprints
This is an antonym poem.30 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
An excellent example of an Antonym poem. Nature can offer answers to life's big questions if we take note of the little footprints that can lead us there. Profound sentiments expressed in a few short lines. Well done
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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An excellent example of an Antonym poem. Nature can offer answers to life's big questions if we take note of the little footprints that can lead us there. Profound sentiments expressed in a few short lines. Well done
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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Hello June. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. Often those tiny footprints are overlooked in our hurry. I appreciate your encouraging comments and support very much, my friend. Thank you.
Comment from Joan E.
I relished your striking artwork that parallels the title of your poem. I admired your contrasting word choices and your use of rhyme. Well done! Best wishes in the contest and to another productive year of writing poetry- Joan
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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I relished your striking artwork that parallels the title of your poem. I admired your contrasting word choices and your use of rhyme. Well done! Best wishes in the contest and to another productive year of writing poetry- Joan
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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Hello Joan. Thank you for the wonderful review and excellent rating for my antonym poem Footprints. I appreciate your encouraging comments and the best wishes very much, my friend. Thank you.
Comment from Joy Graham
This is a very nice contest entry :) I have been reading so many entries lately. I have been learning much about this poetry form and am enjoying it. I like your antonym words of questions and answers. Your descriptive message lines are well done. I do find that I may not find answers right away, they show themselves casually in time. I must learn patience :) Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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This is a very nice contest entry :) I have been reading so many entries lately. I have been learning much about this poetry form and am enjoying it. I like your antonym words of questions and answers. Your descriptive message lines are well done. I do find that I may not find answers right away, they show themselves casually in time. I must learn patience :) Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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Hello Joy. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. I'm glad you enjoyed the the antonyms and message. I appreciate your encouraging comments and support very much, my friend. Thank you.
Comment from Douglas Paul
Ahhh - lots of wisdom in this short post. I am glad I read this one. I will remember it. Trying to get more active again this year and I always enjoy reading your work. Have a great day
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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Ahhh - lots of wisdom in this short post. I am glad I read this one. I will remember it. Trying to get more active again this year and I always enjoy reading your work. Have a great day
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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Hello Douglas. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. I'm really happy to hear you are doing better. I look forward to reading your inventive work. I appreciate your encouraging comments and support very much, my friend. Thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your antonym poetry contest entry. I did see and enjoy the antonym within this poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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I enjoyed reading your antonym poetry contest entry. I did see and enjoy the antonym within this poem. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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Hello Barbara. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. I appreciate your encouraging comments and the good luck wishes very much, my friend. Thank you.
Comment from damommy
I've found that many answers come to me when I get out and walk in nature. It clears my mind and lets me see the answer. This is what your lovely antonym says, and says it beautifully.
'Nature's tiny footsteps' - what a lovely line, and so apt. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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I've found that many answers come to me when I get out and walk in nature. It clears my mind and lets me see the answer. This is what your lovely antonym says, and says it beautifully.
'Nature's tiny footsteps' - what a lovely line, and so apt. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Hello damommy. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. If is sometimes surprising how answers so often found in the quiet simplicity. of nature. I appreciate your encouraging comments and support very much, my friend. Thank you!
Comment from estory
This was one of the most interesting I found in this contest. I think you turned the question around to answer very well, you picked some great words to illustrate confusion, and then you straightened out to the thought process through footprints in nature. I think you had some good use of form, all the halting steps in line two, and then that smooth flow to line three, really worked well in juxtaposition. nice job with this estory
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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This was one of the most interesting I found in this contest. I think you turned the question around to answer very well, you picked some great words to illustrate confusion, and then you straightened out to the thought process through footprints in nature. I think you had some good use of form, all the halting steps in line two, and then that smooth flow to line three, really worked well in juxtaposition. nice job with this estory
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Hello estory. Thank you for the splendid review and the excellent rating for my antonym poem Footprints. I appreciate your detailed analysis which is spot on and support very much, my friend. Thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-Good choice of antonyms.
-The use of one continuous thought,
rhyme, and imagery add to the
message in the poem.
-Questions often confuse us,
but hopefully we are led
to the answers most of the time.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest, RS.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-Good choice of antonyms.
-The use of one continuous thought,
rhyme, and imagery add to the
message in the poem.
-Questions often confuse us,
but hopefully we are led
to the answers most of the time.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest, RS.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Hello Pam. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints and the photograph. I'm pleased that you noted the one line continuous thought and the rhyme. I appreciate your encouraging comments and good luck wishes very much. Thank you.
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You are very welcome and deserving, RS. I am glad you liked the mention of the one continuous thought and rhyme, as well as the best wishes. A good poem to begin 2018.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
This is an excellent entry for the contest, RS. Being in nature often gives us clarity, aiding us in resolving issues and coming up with answers to problems. It relaxes and calms us so that we can better focus on coming up with the answers that we need.
So very well written and presented. Good luck in the contest with this fine entry. ~~~ Connie
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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This is an excellent entry for the contest, RS. Being in nature often gives us clarity, aiding us in resolving issues and coming up with answers to problems. It relaxes and calms us so that we can better focus on coming up with the answers that we need.
So very well written and presented. Good luck in the contest with this fine entry. ~~~ Connie
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Hello Connie. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. Yes, Nature is not only beautiful and calming, but often leads us to answers that we seek. I appreciate your encouraging comments and good luck wishes very much, my friend. Thank you.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a beautiful entry. Your choice of opposites is unique and quite clever as they lead in and out of the body seamlessly as you move from confusion to natural order. All the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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This is a beautiful entry. Your choice of opposites is unique and quite clever as they lead in and out of the body seamlessly as you move from confusion to natural order. All the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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Hello Monica. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my antonym poem Footprints. I always look forward to your encouraging, insightful comments and support very much, my friend. Thank you.
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My pleasure! I always get excited when I see something of yours in my inbox.