Comment from Lance Polin

Excellent

Great picture for the thought. It is an interesting message considering the level of filth that is spraying out into the sky. You show the plus and minus of civilization, progress and destruction. The ideas that continue to grow will sometimes destroy us.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018

Yes you are true, that is horrific what has taken place over centuries but man is learning every day safer ways to accommodate their innovational projects.
Thanks for the review and five stars. Your time especially.

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

The graphic you chose fits the theme of the poem. Not a big haiku fan. It looks like you have done well with this being a recognized work and an All Time Best.Nice job.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018

Thanks for your review, five stars and my recognition.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I like how you suggest IDEAS are the product of long-term thinking. A brief thought might evolve into something significant, but only if it's nurtured. Of course you say all this much better in only 17 syllables.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Thanks for taking the time to review my haiku and giving me the five stars.

Comment from Bump3

Excellent

The artwork you chose fits this piece perfectly! Very nicely written. I can see why this piece has received the "Recognized" and "All Time Best" awards.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Thank you for the nice review and five stars.
The artwork says a whole lot.

Comment from Kelly Hanna

Excellent

Beautiful poem. I stopped to think for a minute about how life experience leads to brainstorming and how we use one idea to get to the next....Good job! You made me think :)

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Thanks for reviewing and. the five stars.
We do it for our survival as well as we have to keep up with the competition that is out there.

reply by Kelly Hanna on 30-Aug-2018

I don't with about the others. I just write. Screw them! This is about us! Not winning! Don't forget-your a poet. Your best with probably colds when you aren't stressed about competitions :) good luck this!!!

reply by Kelly Hanna on 30-Aug-2018

Sorry. Worst typer here. I hope you understood that mess!! Lol

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018

Yes, I understand. The competition, I meant was in innovation with manufacturers.
I here "whiling away my time," and enjoying it.
Once again thanks.

reply by Kelly Hanna on 30-Aug-2018

Got you :)

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem the first line creates my imagination, a few first words spring to mind one being " From' this is very well written and an excellent Haiku, best wishes for your competition****kahpot

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thanks for the five stars, comments and review.

Comment from Michael Steinert

Excellent

I think this is a fine contest entry. The photo and the gray gobalong well with the subject matter. Syllable count looks good and the message is one of progress. Good luck!

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thanks for the five stars and and very nice review.

Comment from Kathleen S.

Excellent

Very well said and written. Your poem definitely speaks of Innovation and how you can find it in the past and in the future. -And how bright ideas keep things progressing.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thanks for the five stars and review.

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very well done all the advances man has made and I like the photo
It was a pleasure to read such outstanding work and this is so well penned. thank you for sharing donette1914 july 8 2018

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2018

Thanks for your nice review and five stars.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Great word combination to affirm what makes mankind great! And the connection of "where we've been" to "where we're headed" is awesome!

Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018

Thank you for the nice review and five stars.