Promises broken
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem. Sometimes we are too quick to make promises and when we discover it was a mistake we made. We keep silent and turn away instead of telling the truth and make things right.
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. Sometimes we are too quick to make promises and when we discover it was a mistake we made. We keep silent and turn away instead of telling the truth and make things right.
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you Sandra
Comment from Cheryl I
Yes, it is hard to handle when promised love disappears. This is a good poem, and it reads smoothly. I think you did a good job on this. All the best - Cheryl
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Yes, it is hard to handle when promised love disappears. This is a good poem, and it reads smoothly. I think you did a good job on this. All the best - Cheryl
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much Cheryl much appreciated.
dip
Comment from Heather Knight
This one is sad, but beautiful as well. You've chosen a topic that is unfortunately very common. Not everybody is lucky in love. And not everybody is faithful.
I'm glad I got one of the good ones.
Thanks for sharing.
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This one is sad, but beautiful as well. You've chosen a topic that is unfortunately very common. Not everybody is lucky in love. And not everybody is faithful.
I'm glad I got one of the good ones.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much Maria much appreciated.
dip
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning, DIP: This is a god point. We recently studied this point that even when we get married we are making a promise before God. He expects us to keep our promise about our marriage. He expects us to stay together until death do us part. This was a very important point form me and yes, every promise should be kept. I hate it when someone tells me they are going to do something and they never do. It's like breaking a trust, serious. Great job!
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Good morning, DIP: This is a god point. We recently studied this point that even when we get married we are making a promise before God. He expects us to keep our promise about our marriage. He expects us to stay together until death do us part. This was a very important point form me and yes, every promise should be kept. I hate it when someone tells me they are going to do something and they never do. It's like breaking a trust, serious. Great job!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much Tier for your insight much appreciated.
dip
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Broken promises cut like a knife Dip and thankfully this has not happened too often to me and probably never to you! Wise words here, best wishes, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Broken promises cut like a knife Dip and thankfully this has not happened too often to me and probably never to you! Wise words here, best wishes, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Both these poems I posted tonight are only poems they haven't happened personally but I here of these situations often Thanks as always for commenting
dip
Comment from lyenochka
Very true. Promises are too often broken. There are many things that cause people to not keep those promises but the grief that it causes can be unbearable.
One spelling issue:
"Can see now why one wollows " (wallows)
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Very true. Promises are too often broken. There are many things that cause people to not keep those promises but the grief that it causes can be unbearable.
One spelling issue:
"Can see now why one wollows " (wallows)
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Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much as always Lyenochka I didn't think that looked right lol fixed now thanks a lot
dip