A Message from Your Father
Tanka poem 5-7-5-7-713 total reviews
Comment from zekeziemann
Your little poem reminded me of a lovely saying that I have spoken to my grown daughter: A son is a son until he takes a wife. A daughter is a daughter all of her life. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
Your little poem reminded me of a lovely saying that I have spoken to my grown daughter: A son is a son until he takes a wife. A daughter is a daughter all of her life. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much. I love your little saying.
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Thank you so much. I love your little saying.
Comment from Wetbelly01
Nice poem... I wish I could walk with my father again...
It seems to me that your poem will do well in the contest...
I certainly have no problems with it....
Well Done as far as I'm concerned!!
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
Nice poem... I wish I could walk with my father again...
It seems to me that your poem will do well in the contest...
I certainly have no problems with it....
Well Done as far as I'm concerned!!
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the good review.
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Thank you for the good review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the 'Uplifting Poetry' writing prompt.
The beautiful artwork is a good match as well.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
This is a good entry for the 'Uplifting Poetry' writing prompt.
The beautiful artwork is a good match as well.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
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Thank you.
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Thank you.