Comment from
Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about fire caught in the mansion, screaming, crying, weeping, sound in addition to fire flame, someone humanely tried to save others, and ultimately saving life of others is not enough, self saving is equally important, fight is on; I like. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
Than you for your review and rating. I am in the process of editing yet again so I appreciate your review.
Sandollar
Comment from
Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'This Picture Starts The Story' writing prompt.
The beautiful picture is a good match as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2017
Thank you for your wonderful review and the rating. I appreciate it.I thought the art work is good also. Thank you for the good wishes.
Sandollar