Comment from damommy

Excellent

I love this. The way they all speak is funny.

So they've been preparing this for a year. That was a well kept secret if Commander Bear didn't know his daughter had volunteered.

Eagerly waiting the next installment.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017

I didn't even know it until this morning.

reply by damommy on 02-Dec-2017

lol

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Aww, this reminds me of the 'Flowerpot Men' (the flobberpot men)
the way they talk, lol, I loved them back in the 1950s. What a lovely story, Bill, I loved it, and will be looking out for the next part to see what happens. Wonderful! :) Sandra. xx

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017

Thanks, Sandra. I will look those guys up.

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 02-Dec-2017

Their names were, Bill and Ben, and they Little Weed. I think she was a dandelion.

Comment from Mimi Linny

Excellent

Ahh... leave 'em hanging! Gotta wait til the next chapter to see what happens! Adorably animated story... Loved Bear's implicit response to the Professor: "Ensign Barr! Dat es mide aughter. Chee es nawt goink!" All fathers want to protect their daughters! Fun story! Looking forward to the continuation!

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017

Thanks, Mimi, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

My first thought was how this would blow up any spellchecker LOL. You are brave calling out the Star Trek and Killer Tomato movies as both have really avid fans out there. I think the concept clever and fun to follow. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.

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 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017

Thanks, Monica, for giving this a look. I have a long list of 'Why?' movies of which these are only a few often cited.

reply by Mystic Angel 7777 on 02-Dec-2017

LOL ... I think your choices were spot on.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hehehehe, Bill, I love it. Their reference to Star trek is hilarious, and their way of speaking makes me laugh out loud. Wonderful! I can just see them in my mind's eye. Great sense of humour on display here. All the best. Ulla:)))

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 Comment Written 02-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2017

Thanks so much, Ulla.