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Comment from kahpot
What an excellent poem and read, and yes this photo is really excellent the lips can be seen, the photo and the title are as great as your words, all together, outstanding, very well done,in my opinion****kahpot
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What an excellent poem and read, and yes this photo is really excellent the lips can be seen, the photo and the title are as great as your words, all together, outstanding, very well done,in my opinion****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you kahpot
That is most encouraging. I appreciate the review, and certainly the 6 stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The sky and its many colours and reactions of weather that make it a fascinating thing to look up to and the thought of the sky being God's kiss is a sweet thought, love Dolly x
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The sky and its many colours and reactions of weather that make it a fascinating thing to look up to and the thought of the sky being God's kiss is a sweet thought, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you Dolly. I fully agree.
Comment from patcelaw
Tom, this photo is a fantastic one of the clouded day and what can be seen in the picture. Your poem is well written and your notes added to the overall feel of a miss from God placed gently on Moses' cheek. I did have to take it to the classic so I could highlight it, which allowed my sick eye to read it, Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Tom, this photo is a fantastic one of the clouded day and what can be seen in the picture. Your poem is well written and your notes added to the overall feel of a miss from God placed gently on Moses' cheek. I did have to take it to the classic so I could highlight it, which allowed my sick eye to read it, Patricia
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you Patricia. I was worried that some people. Might find it hard to read, but I felt the colors essential to the composition. I appreciate the review.
Comment from Bliss A
I can picture this God's kiss ever so gentle on those He holds dear. This is sheer genius. Nicely done, God's loved Moses and though he did not make it to the promised land, he saw it from afar. Good one.
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I can picture this God's kiss ever so gentle on those He holds dear. This is sheer genius. Nicely done, God's loved Moses and though he did not make it to the promised land, he saw it from afar. Good one.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you Bliss A. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from RodG
I really like how you describe Moses's final moments and God's tender kiss. Your use of the ballad format and a chorus seems very appropriate. Stanzas 4 & 5 are especially noteworthy. I also appreciate your notes and research. Thanks so much for sharing. Rod
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I really like how you describe Moses's final moments and God's tender kiss. Your use of the ballad format and a chorus seems very appropriate. Stanzas 4 & 5 are especially noteworthy. I also appreciate your notes and research. Thanks so much for sharing. Rod
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you RodG. I appreciate that you noticed the thoughts and efforts I put in. I liked your review.
Comment from mermaids
There is a good feeling that arises from your words. The image of God kissing us is a positive one that shows His love for us. I think the images of nature remind us of this, like you saw in the sky. You have a musical feel to your words, maybe this poem could be a hymn.
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There is a good feeling that arises from your words. The image of God kissing us is a positive one that shows His love for us. I think the images of nature remind us of this, like you saw in the sky. You have a musical feel to your words, maybe this poem could be a hymn.
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you mermaids. What an awesome suggestion.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ballad poem. Moses and God had a special relationship and yet God let Him die before he entered the promised land. A great picture to illustrate the kiss of God.
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A very well-written ballad poem. Moses and God had a special relationship and yet God let Him die before he entered the promised land. A great picture to illustrate the kiss of God.
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Thank you Sandra, for your time and coments.