Miscellaneous Poems Vol 2
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Comment from Ricky1024
what more can I say A wise man leaves no sentence to One Word discount them up and add them up one two three four five six in one sentence six words and their contest there's really not much you can say words and review it's only six words what can you say the words are all spelled correctly okay there's no grammar issues that the six words or like a train and choo choo yes they were like
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what more can I say A wise man leaves no sentence to One Word discount them up and add them up one two three four five six in one sentence six words and their contest there's really not much you can say words and review it's only six words what can you say the words are all spelled correctly okay there's no grammar issues that the six words or like a train and choo choo yes they were like
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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All the best poems are six words.or fewer, like the following:
John Donne, Anne Donne, Undone.
Maybe people will create college courses about this effort too?
Many thanks,
Craig
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one-line poem. The wise man doesn't leave a sentence hanging in the air before it is finished. People are getting confused very easily.
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A very well-written one-line poem. The wise man doesn't leave a sentence hanging in the air before it is finished. People are getting confused very easily.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
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Many thanks, Sandra. You got it. Much appreciated, Craig
Comment from Dean Kuch
No sentence as in, "I sentence you to death", Craig?
It must be something closely resembling that. Wise men who are poets, philosophers and authors leave their sentences behind all the time.
In fact, the written word and their sentences are their legacy.
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No sentence as in, "I sentence you to death", Craig?
It must be something closely resembling that. Wise men who are poets, philosophers and authors leave their sentences behind all the time.
In fact, the written word and their sentences are their legacy.
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reviewing, Dean. The only rule I've learned about sentences in 50+ years of writing them is that prepositions are something you should never end them with. :)
Much appreciated, Craig
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Yeah, I guess you're right about that, Craig.
Anyhow, you're welcome.
~Dean
Comment from Gloria ....
LOL. I'm giving you top grades for this one, Craig because your author notes are freaking hilarious. Thank you for taking the time to read this work. That had me not only laughing out loud but also filled with envy that I didn't think of it, for my entry. Now I guess I just won't even bother entering the Monostich. You got the rules nailed though, so this is most definitely exceptional and worthy of win. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
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LOL. I'm giving you top grades for this one, Craig because your author notes are freaking hilarious. Thank you for taking the time to read this work. That had me not only laughing out loud but also filled with envy that I didn't think of it, for my entry. Now I guess I just won't even bother entering the Monostich. You got the rules nailed though, so this is most definitely exceptional and worthy of win. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
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I'm so grateful that there's someone here who tolerates my sense of the absurd, Gloria. Don't hold back from entering the contest. I'm fairly certain you have nothing to fear, from this quarter at least :)
Thanks for the fun comments and the lovely rating.
Craig
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good entry for the one line poem contest.
A lot said in a few short words, not easy to do.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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A good entry for the one line poem contest.
A lot said in a few short words, not easy to do.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2017
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Thank you, Sharon, for the kind words and good wishes. Craig