Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

Definitely, there was a strong and commanding voice that supplemented the gist of this piece here very definitively. I loved how this used exactly 666 words, and the phrase "Un-United States" which is spot on accurate. Awesome share

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017

Thanks Cybertron the the United States thing was genius but the 666 was actually pumped as when it was finished it was 667 so I went back at through paragraphs and took out the word now from that was next to know it needed anyhow made it more evil doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

This was delightfully dark and delicious. Super imagery and visuals. Very entertaining. You certainly cut into.the horror genre with feet to spare!

Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 24-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2017

So glad you enjoyed it my previous reviewer love the fact of the on United States in the 666 approximate workout was actually Force for it was 667 so I went back a couple paragraphs and took the word now from in front of the word know didn't need that anyhow that made it more perfectly evil dr. Ricky 1024