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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Being Watched"Inspiration of Life from Photographs
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Comment from Sharon Haiste
I do, I see it. You've a keen eye, I don't think I would have if you hadn't pointed it out.
A descriptive poem, well structured, telling a good story.
Well done.
Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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I do, I see it. You've a keen eye, I don't think I would have if you hadn't pointed it out.
A descriptive poem, well structured, telling a good story.
Well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you Sharon. I am pleased that you saw it too, and appreciate the review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I love the poems you bring out of the objects and plant-life you see and photograph, Tom. This one was quite creepy and it really does look like Goliath's severed head! I enjoyed the rhyme scheme Jim invented. It was perfect because it served your story in this poem well. :) sandra xx
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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I love the poems you bring out of the objects and plant-life you see and photograph, Tom. This one was quite creepy and it really does look like Goliath's severed head! I enjoyed the rhyme scheme Jim invented. It was perfect because it served your story in this poem well. :) sandra xx
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you Sandra. Yes, Jim is a very clever guy. So glad you liked my poem, and its imagery. I am reassured that others see that head too.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a big deal Tom. Magnificent picture and poem about it. You did a great job on the poem. I like your repeat line throughout. You were true to your rhyme scheme and told the story well. It does look like a giant head watching you through the weeds. Good work! Nancy
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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This is a big deal Tom. Magnificent picture and poem about it. You did a great job on the poem. I like your repeat line throughout. You were true to your rhyme scheme and told the story well. It does look like a giant head watching you through the weeds. Good work! Nancy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much Nancy. I am pleased with this wonderful review, and the stars. I am pleased that you think so. Good to know that you see it too.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Symmetrina poem. Another interesting format with a great imaginative topic. If I look correctly I can see the helmet and face of the watcher.
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A very well-written Symmetrina poem. Another interesting format with a great imaginative topic. If I look correctly I can see the helmet and face of the watcher.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2017
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Thank you Sandra. i am glad you saw it too.