Fairy dust moments
Stolen by reality.15 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Tanka poetry contest. Your presentation fits the words of your poem nicely. I like the idea of fairy dust dancing in a kaleidoscope.
~patty~
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Tanka poetry contest. Your presentation fits the words of your poem nicely. I like the idea of fairy dust dancing in a kaleidoscope.
~patty~
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the kind review.
Comment from mermaids
I like the feel of fantasy in your words. There is emotion in your tanka form. "Dancing in Kaleidoscopes" is my favorite line, it gives a clear image of the fairies. Excellent poetic form.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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I like the feel of fantasy in your words. There is emotion in your tanka form. "Dancing in Kaleidoscopes" is my favorite line, it gives a clear image of the fairies. Excellent poetic form.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reviewing. Loved those kaleidocopes.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Everything looks so much bigger, brighter and better as a child.
When we're young we have our whole lives ahead of us and our dreams are unsullied, unspoiled and waiting to be conquered.
Then, we grow older and we soon realize that not everything we envisioned when we were young is going to come to fruition.
If we can allow that without regrets, so be it.
If we harbor any regrets then perhaps we should have tried harder.
Nice tanka, DALLAS--very well done.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Everything looks so much bigger, brighter and better as a child.
When we're young we have our whole lives ahead of us and our dreams are unsullied, unspoiled and waiting to be conquered.
Then, we grow older and we soon realize that not everything we envisioned when we were young is going to come to fruition.
If we can allow that without regrets, so be it.
If we harbor any regrets then perhaps we should have tried harder.
Nice tanka, DALLAS--very well done.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thanks for reviewing Dean. Reality does often obliterate our fantasies.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good Tanka entry.
The picture is beautiful and matches perfectly.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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A good Tanka entry.
The picture is beautiful and matches perfectly.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very intriguing image.
-Syllable count is good.
-You also have a good pivot line.
-Good imagery and topic choice.
-I think the innocence of the poem
is shown well in the beginning and end.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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-Very intriguing image.
-Syllable count is good.
-You also have a good pivot line.
-Good imagery and topic choice.
-I think the innocence of the poem
is shown well in the beginning and end.
-Good luck in the contest.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2017
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Thanks for the detailed review.
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You are welcome.