Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

You go from light to dark with this series, don't you, Bill? I last one I reviewed had him getting duded up in nice clothes and mingling with man. Now reality has set in. And with that comes brutality, death and redemption.

This poem trumps the other, if just from sheer dramatic power. Great job, Bill.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks, Jay, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Bill;
You've given us the sad part of the walrus life in this one. It is so sad to think of how they are hunted, but I guess all animals become prey at one point or another.

This was well done and a good read,

~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks, Patty

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

I really liked this poem and the picture went well with the story line. I did feel that the last few lines could have been done just a bit differently. The entire poem moves smoothly and perfectly until those last few lines. Though not bad, I just feel they could better flow with the poem to make it come together more as whole. Good Job! Sherman541

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 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

I see what you mean, Sherman.Thanks.

reply by Sherman541 on 09-Nov-2017

you are welcome

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a more gruesome side to your Walrus stories.
Still good, just not your usual humor.
The picture is vibrant.
Well done.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 09-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2017

Thanks, Sharon