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Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Well it's all about perspective, isn't it. We can clearly see how the woman feels about the traumas in her life...lol
Will the presentation hold up to the rules? I know hoe iffy the CEC can be. I'm guessing you're using the same font for all just varying italics, boldness and size?
All the best
GMG - I hope this one wins. lol
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Hi there,
Well it's all about perspective, isn't it. We can clearly see how the woman feels about the traumas in her life...lol
Will the presentation hold up to the rules? I know hoe iffy the CEC can be. I'm guessing you're using the same font for all just varying italics, boldness and size?
All the best
GMG - I hope this one wins. lol
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Yeah, it's all the same font. I got some heat for it being a script. But, we'll see. Gotta push the envelope ... go or the gold ... grab the brass ring ... oops, too many words. LOL
Thanks for a great review. I'm happy now, win or lose. :))
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I am not sure how this qualifies for a contest that asks for 'short STORIES' to scare old ladies...?? This is quite plainly a 'script/play/series of scenes' and not a story. I think you need to revise your formatting...?
Good luck!
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I am not sure how this qualifies for a contest that asks for 'short STORIES' to scare old ladies...?? This is quite plainly a 'script/play/series of scenes' and not a story. I think you need to revise your formatting...?
Good luck!
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2017
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I don't see why a one act script can't be a story, but you may be right. :))
If I revised the format, it would still say the same thing. No? Still, you may be right....
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No offense, but I think it's like why a horse can't be a pig. They just can't. They are two different things. Sorry!
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HA! Poor horse and his shattered dreams. LOL
No worries. You really might be right on the money. I still like my little play. Years from now the contest will be but a bitter memory. :))
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HAHAHA! Now, THERE'S the attitude! Go get 'em!
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HAAAAAHAHA!!! You were right. It's a story now. I was busted by the man, the fuzz, the big bosses .... I gave 'em a great fight though. You toughened me up. Thank you. :))