The Eidolon
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Chapter 9 - Mirror"Family heinously murdered. The question is by who?
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Comment from teols2016
Another strong chapter. I like learning about Ryan and am now curious about his brother Ricky. I still need to find time to catch up via the earlier chapters, but that will come. Just a nit-pick, but is Eisenhower anywhere in Ryan's room? Well done.
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Another strong chapter. I like learning about Ryan and am now curious about his brother Ricky. I still need to find time to catch up via the earlier chapters, but that will come. Just a nit-pick, but is Eisenhower anywhere in Ryan's room? Well done.
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2017
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Thanks.