Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem about Autumn's colors and how they make us feel. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri

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Comment from zanya

Excellent

Autumn is truly an inspirational season as portrayed here in this 'Autumn Concerto' - evoked through metaphorical language illustrating color and fading sunlight

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Yes a beautiful poem about the changing season as we say goodbye to autumn and all the beautiful golden hues she bestowed upon us, a delightful seasonal poem, love Dolly x

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Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

These are the kind of poems that remind me of where my soul can be best entertained.

I love poems connecting with nature...it's reminiscent of Robert Frost. The imagery is vividly expressed which gives it that added touch of beauty. Example: "cold" and "gold."

Beautifully presented!

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Comment from RodG

Good

You paint a word picture of Autumn that sustains a pleasant mood. I especially like how you personify Autumn ("kissing the green to gold) and the colors and clouds "pirouetting" and "dancing" and the sun and coming night "holding hands." But I am surprised you did not continue the AABBB rhyme pattern in your final stanza.

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Comment from E.J. Galusha

Good

Evokes lots of positive imagery and energy, identical to what's found here around Mt. Hood in Oregon. I'd love seeing this put to a children's picture book.

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