FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Teachers""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
78 total reviews
Comment from royowen
As the husband of a career teacher, (who continues to do so, even when retired, now she does it for nothing.) A very clever and amusing take, serous but a fun way of composing an acrostic, I love the way you've presented and written this, and a great gesture, well done, blesings, Roy
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As the husband of a career teacher, (who continues to do so, even when retired, now she does it for nothing.) A very clever and amusing take, serous but a fun way of composing an acrostic, I love the way you've presented and written this, and a great gesture, well done, blesings, Roy
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from dragonpoet
Nicely written mixture of stanzaic poetry and acrostic to honor the job teachers
do. Congrats on the win. I like that the letter has a prologue and and epilogue
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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Nicely written mixture of stanzaic poetry and acrostic to honor the job teachers
do. Congrats on the win. I like that the letter has a prologue and and epilogue
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from His Grayness
I Found this to be a very well done work in every dimension! The artwork is very nice and the dialog is also very well done so I cannot offer anything to improve it in any way. My sincere thanks to this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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I Found this to be a very well done work in every dimension! The artwork is very nice and the dialog is also very well done so I cannot offer anything to improve it in any way. My sincere thanks to this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from robina1978
I recognised the artwork immediately: VMarguarite is always nice. And it complements your poem, an Acrostic, perfectly. Not many dare to vary in the layout. It looks very nice and teaches us many things. The last two lines make an excellent ending. Congratulations on your win.
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I recognised the artwork immediately: VMarguarite is always nice. And it complements your poem, an Acrostic, perfectly. Not many dare to vary in the layout. It looks very nice and teaches us many things. The last two lines make an excellent ending. Congratulations on your win.
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
We're active kids, we're on the move.
We've learned not to be idle.
You've taught us well to read and write, and spell.
Here's how we spell your title. Well done with this poem and the acrostic. It is a superb gift of learning shared best regards M xx
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We're active kids, we're on the move.
We've learned not to be idle.
You've taught us well to read and write, and spell.
Here's how we spell your title. Well done with this poem and the acrostic. It is a superb gift of learning shared best regards M xx
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from Cedar
Congratulations on a great win. I enjoyed reading your outstanding poem about "Teachers." I can relate to your words because my son has been a teacher for 23 years and he loves teaching...Bill
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Congratulations on a great win. I enjoyed reading your outstanding poem about "Teachers." I can relate to your words because my son has been a teacher for 23 years and he loves teaching...Bill
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from Eternal Muse
Great poetic tribute to Teachers of the world. They deserves the best accolades, as it's a teacher that introduces us to the world of learning, and symbolizes the beginning of an era of self-discovery.
NATIONAL TEACHERS' DAY.
A tribute to our Teachers:
Signed, Sealed, and Delivered;
IN OUR LOVE LETTER.
Dear teachers:
Thank You for your time.
You've really taught us well.
You've taught us how to read and write.
You've taught us how to spell.
You found wonderful words to pay the tribute to teachers.
Congrats on your win.
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Great poetic tribute to Teachers of the world. They deserves the best accolades, as it's a teacher that introduces us to the world of learning, and symbolizes the beginning of an era of self-discovery.
NATIONAL TEACHERS' DAY.
A tribute to our Teachers:
Signed, Sealed, and Delivered;
IN OUR LOVE LETTER.
Dear teachers:
Thank You for your time.
You've really taught us well.
You've taught us how to read and write.
You've taught us how to spell.
You found wonderful words to pay the tribute to teachers.
Congrats on your win.
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from mvbrooks
It's interesting the contrast between "there's no exception to the rule" and the way you've written an acrostic within a poem and made an exception to the "use the letters of that word for the first letter of EACH line in your poem." Congratulations on your win and on your creativity being rewarded.
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It's interesting the contrast between "there's no exception to the rule" and the way you've written an acrostic within a poem and made an exception to the "use the letters of that word for the first letter of EACH line in your poem." Congratulations on your win and on your creativity being rewarded.
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from Hitcher
I for one thoroughly enjoyed my time at school and had a great relationship with all my teachers.i enjoyed your poem friend, congrats on the win, that is always a nice rewardð???
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I for one thoroughly enjoyed my time at school and had a great relationship with all my teachers.i enjoyed your poem friend, congrats on the win, that is always a nice rewardð???
Comment Written 09-May-2018
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, it's a fantastic poem and I really liked it. Congratulation on your win. I'm surprised, though, because only one stanza was an acrostic. I thought they all had to be an acrostic. That's what the rules said. All the best. Ulla:))
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Hi there, it's a fantastic poem and I really liked it. Congratulation on your win. I'm surprised, though, because only one stanza was an acrostic. I thought they all had to be an acrostic. That's what the rules said. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 09-May-2018
