Willy
He came and he left...33 total reviews
Comment from Lucian Carter
I think you did a good job telling the story in fifty words. It's a real "Believe it, or Not" story. Thing is, can you enter non-fiction in a flash fiction contest?
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I think you did a good job telling the story in fifty words. It's a real "Believe it, or Not" story. Thing is, can you enter non-fiction in a flash fiction contest?
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
Comment from doggymad
This was a lovely story. I can understand having a dog for companionship. It is strange that both the dog on husband departed together.
Well written in such a short format
hugs
Freda
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This was a lovely story. I can understand having a dog for companionship. It is strange that both the dog on husband departed together.
Well written in such a short format
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
Comment from mermaids
This is quite the story. I had a dog named Willy and a cat named Willy. It seems that the Willy here did his duty and left. Excellent flash fiction that tells a tale of a tail and a husband.
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This is quite the story. I had a dog named Willy and a cat named Willy. It seems that the Willy here did his duty and left. Excellent flash fiction that tells a tale of a tail and a husband.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
Yes, strange as it may seem I've seen many partners come home to die. The dog and his fate is peculiar to say the least. The poem is succinct as demanded, yet tells the story precisely. (Would it be too crass to ask which one you miss most?)
Warmly,
Juliette
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Yes, strange as it may seem I've seen many partners come home to die. The dog and his fate is peculiar to say the least. The poem is succinct as demanded, yet tells the story precisely. (Would it be too crass to ask which one you miss most?)
Warmly,
Juliette
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
Comment from dmt1967
This is a spooky story and would be a great story for the halloween poem contest or story. I love the picture as well. Great doggy spooky story. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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This is a spooky story and would be a great story for the halloween poem contest or story. I love the picture as well. Great doggy spooky story. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow, this really is spooky. It's almost as if your husband's spirit was in the dog. That wOuld explain why he didn't like you or those around you, but he DID seem to like your husband. Strange story. :)
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Wow, this really is spooky. It's almost as if your husband's spirit was in the dog. That wOuld explain why he didn't like you or those around you, but he DID seem to like your husband. Strange story. :)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Now that is a strange and startling tale. Dogs are mysterious creatures indeed and have some in-built peculiarities.
A weird piece for the comp.
GMG
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Hi there,
Now that is a strange and startling tale. Dogs are mysterious creatures indeed and have some in-built peculiarities.
A weird piece for the comp.
GMG
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
Comment from frierajac
I enjoyed this quite a lot because my own personal back story today was reading
a ghost story about a castle haunted by dogs in ancient times. By Edith Wharton, who wrote great ghost stories.
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I enjoyed this quite a lot because my own personal back story today was reading
a ghost story about a castle haunted by dogs in ancient times. By Edith Wharton, who wrote great ghost stories.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
Comment from Spitfire
There's a message somewhere in here. Nothing is coincidental. Willy hated everyone, yet stayed with Mike while died and then disappeared from your life same as Mike. Strange.
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There's a message somewhere in here. Nothing is coincidental. Willy hated everyone, yet stayed with Mike while died and then disappeared from your life same as Mike. Strange.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
Comment from l.raven
Hi Loanna, I am so sorry for the loss of your husband...and for the loss of Willy...but they are both together...like my husband and my...he's a cute little fellow...and he smiling...that's what I said when my dog would look like this...may they both rest in peace...thank you for sharing your story my friend...very well written...Love Linda xxoo
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Hi Loanna, I am so sorry for the loss of your husband...and for the loss of Willy...but they are both together...like my husband and my...he's a cute little fellow...and he smiling...that's what I said when my dog would look like this...may they both rest in peace...thank you for sharing your story my friend...very well written...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017