Her Broken Wings
Love poem contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely poem and lovely picture, too! I think of you and your great love story between you and your husband. That story shines through in this poem. Praise God for bringing you two together!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Lovely poem and lovely picture, too! I think of you and your great love story between you and your husband. That story shines through in this poem. Praise God for bringing you two together!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, Helen. It is somewhat biographical.
Comment from sandy montgomery
Lovely presentation. This is a beautiful entry into the contest. God's love for us is the Greatest love we can know. No spag or typos. Very well done. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Lovely presentation. This is a beautiful entry into the contest. God's love for us is the Greatest love we can know. No spag or typos. Very well done. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, Sandy.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Patricia,
As usual I like the poem that you've written.
It was very nice to see and to read.
I think you've told this great poem very well.
Kat
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Hi Patricia,
As usual I like the poem that you've written.
It was very nice to see and to read.
I think you've told this great poem very well.
Kat
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, Kat.
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You are very welcome Patricia.
Comment from Sasha
Lovely work with this entry. I have to agree, I often believe the good in our lives is all a part of God's plan for us. Excellent entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. I love the illustration you used to accompany this one too.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Lovely work with this entry. I have to agree, I often believe the good in our lives is all a part of God's plan for us. Excellent entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. I love the illustration you used to accompany this one too.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, Sasha. This is somewhat biographical.
Comment from Mimi Linny
A very sweet love poem of a new love to replace another. Rhyme and rhythm are pretty good and loved the photo to accompany! Good luck in the contest!
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A very sweet love poem of a new love to replace another. Rhyme and rhythm are pretty good and loved the photo to accompany! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Mimi.
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very beautifully written love poem. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest my friend! Teri
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Patricia, This is a very beautifully written love poem. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest my friend! Teri
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, Teri,
Comment from Poetic Friend
Patricia,
This is certainly one of your best poems. It is so refreshing to read a relationship that went well. Too often, I read about stories and poems where the relationships fail. I am guilty of writing poems as such, too. However, I do write positive love poems as well.
Everything is perfect in this poem -- perfect rhyme, perfect sentiments, perfect message and perfect touch of spirituality.
I love your poetry! You are so talented.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Patricia,
This is certainly one of your best poems. It is so refreshing to read a relationship that went well. Too often, I read about stories and poems where the relationships fail. I am guilty of writing poems as such, too. However, I do write positive love poems as well.
Everything is perfect in this poem -- perfect rhyme, perfect sentiments, perfect message and perfect touch of spirituality.
I love your poetry! You are so talented.
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review, PF
