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Comment from Teri7
This is another one of your too cute poems about the ducks. So funny the one duck was so dressed up and little daughter duck was not so fixed up! Very cute wording and cute imagery! I enjoyed reading it! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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This is another one of your too cute poems about the ducks. So funny the one duck was so dressed up and little daughter duck was not so fixed up! Very cute wording and cute imagery! I enjoyed reading it! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from nomi338
Dalphinea looks just a bit tattered, like maybe she was rode hard and put away wet. Her decorations are not that smooth looking, as if maybe something was put on a bit hastily. Either way since no human will be looking and judging, I guess it will be OK.
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Dalphinea looks just a bit tattered, like maybe she was rode hard and put away wet. Her decorations are not that smooth looking, as if maybe something was put on a bit hastily. Either way since no human will be looking and judging, I guess it will be OK.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
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She's the Delta Dawn of the duck world
Comment from damommy
Poor little girl. Don't write her off yet. I bet she grows up to be more beautiful than her mother. That happens a lot of times.
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Poor little girl. Don't write her off yet. I bet she grows up to be more beautiful than her mother. That happens a lot of times.
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
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She's a Mommy Dearest daughter duck
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Oh! 8-)
Comment from Ulla
Awwwww, how cruel you are. But you're right, this doesn't apply to the duck world only. Some women are like that. They bring along a dull underling to excel themeselves. Disgusting. Another great wee poem. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Awwwww, how cruel you are. But you're right, this doesn't apply to the duck world only. Some women are like that. They bring along a dull underling to excel themeselves. Disgusting. Another great wee poem. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
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Didn't mean to be cruel to Darleen, Dalphinea's daughter. That kind of thing just rolls off her back like, well, you know.