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Animal poetry and short stories
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Comment from
Mustang Patty
LOL!
I so enjoy your duck poems, and I especially enjoyed the alliteration in the last line of this poem. It seems to be the ducks I watch always 'drop a duck deuce.'
Well done and thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
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Teri7
This is a very neat and interesting poem about the duck billed platypus being a drug duck. Too cute! You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with the picture! Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
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Nick DeMoss
The ending is the best part of this poem. Clever concept to have a drug-sniffing duck. Love the alliteration in the last line. Drug duck drops deuce.
Not much else to say except I'd like to read more.
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
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