LOVE OF NATURE
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Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. I like what you do with the word purple here, very imaginative. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. I like what you do with the word purple here, very imaginative. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
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I?m grateful for your kind review, reader enjoyment is paramount to me.
hugs, Trisha
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hey there, Trisha: This is a surprise! I came to your portfolio to find, "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not" and yet I bumped into this wonderful post. A poem about purple, my favorite color, well, one of my most favorite colors. This poem is remarkable. You should have entered it into the poetry contest. That contest that I entered, Two Boys Stabbed In School" into, it just required that you enter any poem, any form. It did not require any more than that. This poem would have done very well. Awesome! I wonder why I was not alerted about this post.
I seem to be having a problem finding that other story. I will go back to the portfolio and go to the next page. I saw it yesterday.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Hey there, Trisha: This is a surprise! I came to your portfolio to find, "He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not" and yet I bumped into this wonderful post. A poem about purple, my favorite color, well, one of my most favorite colors. This poem is remarkable. You should have entered it into the poetry contest. That contest that I entered, Two Boys Stabbed In School" into, it just required that you enter any poem, any form. It did not require any more than that. This poem would have done very well. Awesome! I wonder why I was not alerted about this post.
I seem to be having a problem finding that other story. I will go back to the portfolio and go to the next page. I saw it yesterday.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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This was for another club fabulous free verse club. It's not a contest, just a challenge. This was my first post to that site. Want to join? Thanks for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha
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No, I'm already spending too much time in Fan Story and I have too many poems and stories to write for contests that I already entered. Where is that story that I have been wanting to read?
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I will look
Comment from michaelcahill
I love your take on this. These are your reflections as though you are lost in thought contemplating life as you immerse yourself in what is before you. You're a part of what you see, but it draws from you as well. It makes for a strong piece as the words and artwork go hand in hand. That's exactly what this type of piece should do. Great work. mike
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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I love your take on this. These are your reflections as though you are lost in thought contemplating life as you immerse yourself in what is before you. You're a part of what you see, but it draws from you as well. It makes for a strong piece as the words and artwork go hand in hand. That's exactly what this type of piece should do. Great work. mike
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Wow, Mike! You don't know me, but I know your status and reputation. I feel highly honored and excited to have your review. It is very supportive and complimentary. Thank you so much.
Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I've never seen a purple sky and your descriptions of vapours that will eventually kill us made me sit up and take notice, I am hoping my sunsets stay amber, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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I've never seen a purple sky and your descriptions of vapours that will eventually kill us made me sit up and take notice, I am hoping my sunsets stay amber, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Google 'purple clouds'..I'm hoping your skies are always inocuous, thanks for reviewing, Dolly
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh wow you captured the warning with true clarity and excellent free verse that describes the end perfectly. Very nicely done
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Oh wow you captured the warning with true clarity and excellent free verse that describes the end perfectly. Very nicely done
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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I am very happy with the first free.verse challenge result! Thanks for your review and compliments.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Trisha;
Wow, there are a lot of different emotions being expressed in this poem. Pollution, the coming storm, and the diversity of the color purple. I enjoyed reading your interpretation of the club's ekphratic challenge. Purple is my favorite color,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Hi, Trisha;
Wow, there are a lot of different emotions being expressed in this poem. Pollution, the coming storm, and the diversity of the color purple. I enjoyed reading your interpretation of the club's ekphratic challenge. Purple is my favorite color,
~patty~
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks patty, that was very free thought for this picture. You wrote an encouraging review, for which I thank you
Hugs, Trisha