Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

This is a well written poem, my friend. How are you? I haven't talked to you in ages. Tell you muse the party is over and it is time to get to work. Take care, my friend~Debbie

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 Comment Written 05-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017

Hi dear friend,
It is nice to be missed. I had a talk with my muse, to no avail. LOL
We have had many sicknesses and death in the family and I have
lost touch with so many extracurricular activities I once took for
granted. Debbie, I subscribed to the program on FS that allows us
to save our work to an outside source. Do you use that? I haven't
copied anything yet but hopefully it will take me one step closer to
publishing a collection of works.
Take care, talk to you soon,
:-) Carolyn

reply by dejohnsrld (Debbie) on 20-Oct-2017

I understand. I have had a rough summer and not been writing as usual. I don't have that program--but am interested in it. Let me know what you think when you have used it. Take care, my friend~Debbie

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your ABAB poem :"Lighthouse Watch". You followed all the rules for this genre and you have chosen an appropriate picture. (Though an evening one - if you can find one may be better)
All the best.
Marybell1.

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 Comment Written 05-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017

Thank you and I appreciate your commentary, as well as the
validation of the piece. You are so right, a night-time pic would
have been better. I kinda settled for a quick find.
:-) Carolyn

reply by marybell1 on 19-Oct-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1