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The Eidolon

Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Chapter 5 - Part 3: Chasing Ghosts"
Family heinously murdered. The question is by who?

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written chapter. Sometimes parents treat their children unfair knowingly or unknowingly and the child builds up hatred silently until they snap one day and all hell breaks loose.

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
    Thanks.

    Glad you are enjoying this story.