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Comment from damommy
I will keep this in mind. Caterpillars troubles reflect life trials. We must keep going, and someday, I may be a butterfly. 8-)
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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I will keep this in mind. Caterpillars troubles reflect life trials. We must keep going, and someday, I may be a butterfly. 8-)
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Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Thanks for giving this a look, da. Bill
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Bill,
This is a great caterpillar poem & comment on life. While it describes the caterpillar's journey, it also describes the ups & downs of life. I like the rhymes & the BLEEP BLEEP.
But it is the ending that is great. Through it all the caterpillar works to make it to a butterfly just as one works to make a successful like [or not]. There is that goal to aim for. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Bill,
This is a great caterpillar poem & comment on life. While it describes the caterpillar's journey, it also describes the ups & downs of life. I like the rhymes & the BLEEP BLEEP.
But it is the ending that is great. Through it all the caterpillar works to make it to a butterfly just as one works to make a successful like [or not]. There is that goal to aim for. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 27-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2017
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Thank, Jan, the the meaningful review. Bill