Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Oh I had to laugh at this piece such a gentle poem until her leg goes clank made me laugh I enjoyed my friend well done again regards Jill

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017

Thanks, Mrs P.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Wait. What? Where the hell? Come on now Bill, I just want to see who put the leg on, how did they do it, did they sedate him? How did he pay for it? You have left me with a thousand unanswerable questions. Just how the heck can I go to sleep tonight with all of these burning questions rolling around inside my head?

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017

These are great questions. I'll do some research.

reply by nomi338 on 26-Sep-2017

God speed. Good hunting, I know you will not disappoint.

Comment from beizanten

Excellent

A short, simple yet interesting poem with good imaginary. The first paragraph pretty much capture my attention


Keep up the great work

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2017

Thank you, beizanten, for giving this a look. Bill.