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Comment from country ranch writer
Getting drunk and getting it on with some one and not rember in git wow! Could be a fluke or it could be something she might wish never happened again.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Getting drunk and getting it on with some one and not rember in git wow! Could be a fluke or it could be something she might wish never happened again.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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I'm sure Rosie doesn't know I exist, but maybe ... LOL!!! Fun to make up though. Thanks a million. :))
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Comment from frierajac
I imagine this is in your dreams. Or was at one time. I hope that
as a short work of fiction it may inspire to a more thorough rendition of Rosie's personality
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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I imagine this is in your dreams. Or was at one time. I hope that
as a short work of fiction it may inspire to a more thorough rendition of Rosie's personality
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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I'd love to explore Rosie's personality thoroughly. I'm not sure she'd be that interested though. LOL
Yeah, pretty much in my dreams, or really just off the top of my head. :)) mike
Comment from Gloria ....
I have no idea what drabble fiction is, so I can't made an educated assessment, so I will make an uneducated assessment instead. This is terrific! I'd say buddy is in a LOT of trouble if he plans on repeat match. Because in truth it could've been anything at all, which makes it even more hilarious. But the upside is, I guess, it's a reason for getting into the slaintes.
Most entertaining Mav. Is there gonna be a white out next time?
Ange
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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I have no idea what drabble fiction is, so I can't made an educated assessment, so I will make an uneducated assessment instead. This is terrific! I'd say buddy is in a LOT of trouble if he plans on repeat match. Because in truth it could've been anything at all, which makes it even more hilarious. But the upside is, I guess, it's a reason for getting into the slaintes.
Most entertaining Mav. Is there gonna be a white out next time?
Ange
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Your buddy, ie-ME, would be in a lot of trouble indeed. LOL! I'm thinking for a sequel, Rosie gets a hold of this and confronts me. "Are you serious? YOU? You MUST drink a LOT!!!!!" Hmmm .... not that funny, to ME anyway. HA!
Pleased you found this amusing, Ange. True potlatch style, right off the top of my head. :)) Mav
Comment from sandy montgomery
Poor guy, what a dilemma indeed. This contained a great amount of humor. It's a perfect example of how a few well chosen words can tell an entertaining and complete story. I enjoyed your piece very much.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Poor guy, what a dilemma indeed. This contained a great amount of humor. It's a perfect example of how a few well chosen words can tell an entertaining and complete story. I enjoyed your piece very much.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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So pleased you found it funny. That was the idea. Thanks for a great review. You should stop by and try one. Only a hundred words. :)) mike
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I might do just that.
Comment from DR DIP
nothing like wet dreams Michael hope you changed your jarmies! lol
the chick looks hot so I can understand what you were dreaming about and why.
Last night in Australia in Sydney which is on the east coast of Australia in a state called NSW
Last night, it was the hottest September night on record...nothing happened in MY bed?!
5 stars for the hot sex! lol
dip
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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nothing like wet dreams Michael hope you changed your jarmies! lol
the chick looks hot so I can understand what you were dreaming about and why.
Last night in Australia in Sydney which is on the east coast of Australia in a state called NSW
Last night, it was the hottest September night on record...nothing happened in MY bed?!
5 stars for the hot sex! lol
dip
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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HA! This was right off the top of my head for the potlatch challenge. Rosie is a doll though. Pretty hot here in the desert too. Ahhh .... if my bed could talk ... it would probably ask me what the problem is. LOL mike
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Michael,
How are you doing, sweetie pie? This potlatch Challenge-Drabble Fiction-Blackout is really good. I like Rosie Perez, she is an interesting choice. Good job, honey.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Hello, Michael,
How are you doing, sweetie pie? This potlatch Challenge-Drabble Fiction-Blackout is really good. I like Rosie Perez, she is an interesting choice. Good job, honey.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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HI! Much better now that I see you are in the swing of things. Smile.
Rosie has always been one of my favorites. Yes, a good choice, I agree. Glad you liked this. Good to see you. Mike
Comment from nordicgirl
Hehehe!!!!
This is too funny. I know this is your dream, so I hope this is actually a true story for Rosie`s sake! Lucky girl. The real miracle is that ypu managed when you were that drunk. What a classy guy. Haaaaaa! NG
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Hehehe!!!!
This is too funny. I know this is your dream, so I hope this is actually a true story for Rosie`s sake! Lucky girl. The real miracle is that ypu managed when you were that drunk. What a classy guy. Haaaaaa! NG
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Awww .... you are such a great liar. That is true friendship. I've always said I'm a classy drunk. Thanks so much. Myssckuullll......
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL oh yes you did the challenge so well. Your imagination on love ideas reaches beyond mine and I love your breath of fresh air
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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LOL oh yes you did the challenge so well. Your imagination on love ideas reaches beyond mine and I love your breath of fresh air
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Ahhh, excellent. I'm glad SOMEBODY appreciates me. Thanks sooooo much. mike
Comment from Rubylou
Lol this was fun to read. Now comes the next night. Whatever will he do...
Hmm a sequel perhaps?
Poor guy I hope he can pull it together before he meets up with Rosie.
Nicely done.
Rubylou
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Lol this was fun to read. Now comes the next night. Whatever will he do...
Hmm a sequel perhaps?
Poor guy I hope he can pull it together before he meets up with Rosie.
Nicely done.
Rubylou
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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I'm a little nervous. I'll just drink so much I won't know what happened. It worked once! LOL
Thanks so much. Great to hear from you. mike
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my! I'm wondering and a little worried. LOL I did enjoy reading your short and to the point skit. Your writing talent shines through again. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Oh my! I'm wondering and a little worried. LOL I did enjoy reading your short and to the point skit. Your writing talent shines through again. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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All in my mind and totally made up. I'm sure Rosie is relieved. LOL
So pleased you enjoyed. You do spoil me with your complements. Thank you so kindly. mike