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Comment from Possummagic
Haha I really like your caterpillar poem. You have such a wonderful way with words. Not sure that they are soul tillers though. I thought caterpillars ate leaves. Worms are soil tillers. Small issue. Great poem. PM
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Haha I really like your caterpillar poem. You have such a wonderful way with words. Not sure that they are soul tillers though. I thought caterpillars ate leaves. Worms are soil tillers. Small issue. Great poem. PM
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Lewis Carrol has one smoking a hooka.
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Well if it can smoke a hookah it can do anything it likes! PM
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi Bill, almost musical flow to your words, love the energy, format colours that contribute to a wonderful read, particularly enjoyed the knee-o-phyte stanza........very clever
Mitchell
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Hi Bill, almost musical flow to your words, love the energy, format colours that contribute to a wonderful read, particularly enjoyed the knee-o-phyte stanza........very clever
Mitchell
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Mitchell. I like that stanza too.
