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Family heinously murdered. The question is by who?

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Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Brett.

"The killer of the Lancaster family had been an(a) prowler named Otis Jackson."

Very interesting and scary stuff, mate. A copy cat killer... they are often worse than the original one.

Hopefully I can keep up to find out what happens.

Cheers Fez

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 Comment Written 21-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this chapter.

    Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Sankey
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This is a very gruesome but enthralling drama. A good read all through. Now
for the spags. Lancaster family had been a[n] prowler named Otis Jackson.

The vagrant met a[n] timely

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 Comment Written 21-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this chapter.

    Appreciate your comments and support.
reply by Sankey on 22-Sep-2017
    Hi I deleted the chapter from Louise's book I appreciated the review though. If I am still around I may Ghostwrite a re-run of her book. Tom's "firewall" system was not fair to us at all. Read more in your comments area.