The Eidolon
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Chapter 2 - Part 1: Visitation"Family heinously murdered. The question is by who?
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Comment from apky
You've started another gripping read, Brett.
Your descriptions are vivid and I could see the scenes, even hear the footsteps ringing in the facility. The element of suspense stays with the reader throughout.
An excellent story I'm certain to follow to see how you develop it.
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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You've started another gripping read, Brett.
Your descriptions are vivid and I could see the scenes, even hear the footsteps ringing in the facility. The element of suspense stays with the reader throughout.
An excellent story I'm certain to follow to see how you develop it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of the story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
