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Comment from Curly Girly
This was a fun way to rehash an old joke.
Well done, it was fun to read.
Skeemer: And re'scent'ly. When you're down and out everybody's a car tire.
Yeah, life gets like that.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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This was a fun way to rehash an old joke.
Well done, it was fun to read.
Skeemer: And re'scent'ly. When you're down and out everybody's a car tire.
Yeah, life gets like that.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thanks, CG
Comment from Cass Carlton
I don't mean to seem unpleasant, but I am glad the little skunk did actually make it across the road. I was waiting for the punch line of another black red and white road smear and the last skunk making some "sarky" remark. This format is a departure from previous postings, and one which I find appealing. Nice one Bill . cheers Cass
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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I don't mean to seem unpleasant, but I am glad the little skunk did actually make it across the road. I was waiting for the punch line of another black red and white road smear and the last skunk making some "sarky" remark. This format is a departure from previous postings, and one which I find appealing. Nice one Bill . cheers Cass
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Cass. I guess there a million ways to write this scene.
Comment from Kerry Foley
Bill, this is a hilariuos script, lol. I started laughing in your first line with " 'scent'ual." very funny how you incorporated these through the write, Fantastic humor. Good luck! ~Kerry
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Bill, this is a hilariuos script, lol. I started laughing in your first line with " 'scent'ual." very funny how you incorporated these through the write, Fantastic humor. Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 07-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Kerry
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Your welcome.
Comment from Spitfire
Really cute. I like that you highlighted scent every time you use it. After all, some readers can't smell anything even if it's right under their nose. An old job at the ending, but you did it well.
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Really cute. I like that you highlighted scent every time you use it. After all, some readers can't smell anything even if it's right under their nose. An old job at the ending, but you did it well.
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017
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Thanks, Shari, for the X-sc-L-ent review. Bill
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Good one. LOL
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
haha what a fun read Bill. I never would of thought of 2 skunks having conversation. I like the 'scent' words you included. They all added to the fun of this well written script. Your picture is perfect, too.
Good job & thanks for sharing a fun read. Jan
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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haha what a fun read Bill. I never would of thought of 2 skunks having conversation. I like the 'scent' words you included. They all added to the fun of this well written script. Your picture is perfect, too.
Good job & thanks for sharing a fun read. Jan
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you, Jan