Meandering Mind
Thoughts in early morning21 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
This is wonderful. Love the old timey train picture, love the descriptions....I can taste the oatmeal, yum!!! One tiny correction...4th line...you have 'Get up tp '...I think you mean 'Get up to'...great entry...blessings...
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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This is wonderful. Love the old timey train picture, love the descriptions....I can taste the oatmeal, yum!!! One tiny correction...4th line...you have 'Get up tp '...I think you mean 'Get up to'...great entry...blessings...
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you and yes I fixed the typo. So good of you to catch that as well. :-) Carolyn
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You're most welcome!!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend you have done well using this form painting a scene that describes a persons thoughts about life reflecting on there past and future well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Hello my friend you have done well using this form painting a scene that describes a persons thoughts about life reflecting on there past and future well done regards Jill
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thanks Jill and it is great to see you. :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
Nicely done, Carolyn. I have not seen this type poem before now. You have very cleverly made it sound good. Love the picture. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Nicely done, Carolyn. I have not seen this type poem before now. You have very cleverly made it sound good. Love the picture. Miss Sally
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Hi Miss Sally, its the first time I have seen one and the first one I have written..i enjoyed writing it.. Glad you liked it. :-) thank you so much.. Carolyn
Comment from royowen
A beautifully composed and projected work, and as an entry in this nove otto contest, a superb one my friend. Yes, the affairs of achieving what is already written in heaven concerning our lives, is a a cause for thought, but it's the heart that counts, not the concern...that is taken care of. So just rest dear Carolyn, it's as natural as rising from bed each morning. "A good tree..." Matthew 7:18, Luke 6:43. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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A beautifully composed and projected work, and as an entry in this nove otto contest, a superb one my friend. Yes, the affairs of achieving what is already written in heaven concerning our lives, is a a cause for thought, but it's the heart that counts, not the concern...that is taken care of. So just rest dear Carolyn, it's as natural as rising from bed each morning. "A good tree..." Matthew 7:18, Luke 6:43. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Dear Roy, I loved your remarks more than the poem. Thank you so much for always saying such wonderfully encouraging words. Love ,Carolyn
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Most welcome Carolyn,
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the mind that moves aimlessly and idly without fixed direction in the early morning and that thinks about something beyond this world and beyond life; I liked.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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This speaks the mind that moves aimlessly and idly without fixed direction in the early morning and that thinks about something beyond this world and beyond life; I liked.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you for such insightfully kind words. :-) Carolyn
Comment from mermaids
I admire your use of rhyming words that adds a smooth flow to your poem. Your vivid use of words captures the feeling of waking up in the morning and facing the day.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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I admire your use of rhyming words that adds a smooth flow to your poem. Your vivid use of words captures the feeling of waking up in the morning and facing the day.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you mermaids fir your kind comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem. :-) Carolyn
Comment from patcelaw
Good poem for the contest. You may want to check line 4 and make it to instead of tp.
Blessings for a wonderful day and have peace and joy. Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Good poem for the contest. You may want to check line 4 and make it to instead of tp.
Blessings for a wonderful day and have peace and joy. Patricia
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Hi Patricia, I fixed the typo, and thank you for noticing it. I appreciate your kind words and that you liked the poem..:-) Carolyn
Comment from c_lucas
Deep thoughts of life rush through my head
Still works of value I must do
Before my time on Earth is through
When this frail mortal shell is shed
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The above lines pretty much defines the way of life for most people.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Deep thoughts of life rush through my head
Still works of value I must do
Before my time on Earth is through
When this frail mortal shell is shed
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The above lines pretty much defines the way of life for most people.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Hi, Charlie and thank you for the affirmation..
Yes, when all is said and done, most folks want to
do what is right, while they can...
Good to see you... Glad you read the work..
:-) Carolyn
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You're welcome, Carolyn. Charlie
Comment from Possummagic
I enjoyed your Nove Otto poem and wish you well for the contest. Your imagery is good also. I liked the title of your piece. Meandering mind. Good luck. PM
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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I enjoyed your Nove Otto poem and wish you well for the contest. Your imagery is good also. I liked the title of your piece. Meandering mind. Good luck. PM
Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind review and the best wishes... stop in anytime..:-) Carolyn
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You're welcome.
Comment from Thal1959
Very nice work, although I won't wish you luck in the contest because I have a poem entered into it. Lol. Yours is a descriptive work about simple life and I found the lines, "Still works of value I must do - Before my time on Earth is through" reminiscent of Frost. (And I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep.)
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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Very nice work, although I won't wish you luck in the contest because I have a poem entered into it. Lol. Yours is a descriptive work about simple life and I found the lines, "Still works of value I must do - Before my time on Earth is through" reminiscent of Frost. (And I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep.)
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Comment Written 06-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2017
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I like Frost too.. Should I now wish you the best.. LOL.. I will anyway and thank you for the kind remarks.. Sooo glad you liked it.. I will read yours as well. :-) Carolyn
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You're welcome. That is perhaps the one really good thing about the site sponsored contests. We can ask someone to read our entry. We can't do that for a work in the voting booth.