Curing a Crazie
Ahab is a pussycat underneath it all15 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Dennis, you did a wonderful job with the prompt. Your script read easily and was a fun read. Many blessings for a wonderful holiday. Patricia
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Dennis, you did a wonderful job with the prompt. Your script read easily and was a fun read. Many blessings for a wonderful holiday. Patricia
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Thanks Pat, and happy non Labor Day to us retires!😄
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We retirees now labor to deal with the pain in these creaky bodies.
Comment from Spitfire
Well done, CK. First sentence sets the time and place. The dialogue is appropriately polite but heats up (as noted by the exclamation points) as Starbuck presents his case.
Tension broken by humor (STARBUCK: "I would give an arm and a leg if...) (Peapod)
Ahab has the best laugh line though ('Who played me in the movie?")
Read the book and saw the movie---great argument!
Love it. Now I'm thinking you may well be Superman.
X0X LL
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Well done, CK. First sentence sets the time and place. The dialogue is appropriately polite but heats up (as noted by the exclamation points) as Starbuck presents his case.
Tension broken by humor (STARBUCK: "I would give an arm and a leg if...) (Peapod)
Ahab has the best laugh line though ('Who played me in the movie?")
Read the book and saw the movie---great argument!
Love it. Now I'm thinking you may well be Superman.
X0X LL
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Was there ever any doubt in your mind re me being Superman? Lol 😂 thxs Mom!
Comment from apky
I think you did an absolutely excellent job with the Moby Dick tale. You made the whole thing so hilarious I kept on laughing or smiling or chuckling to myself.
Well done.
"I would give an arm and a leg if...oh, sorry... ~ I liked the subtle humour.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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I think you did an absolutely excellent job with the Moby Dick tale. You made the whole thing so hilarious I kept on laughing or smiling or chuckling to myself.
Well done.
"I would give an arm and a leg if...oh, sorry... ~ I liked the subtle humour.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Thank you, so glad you enjoyed it! Dennis
Comment from bluedragon776
This is totally cute. I love the pace of the interaction between the captain and Starbuck. I don't under stand Ahab's question...line six. Very enjoyable otherwise. But how would the good 'ol captain know what the heck a movie is anyway? :)
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This is totally cute. I love the pace of the interaction between the captain and Starbuck. I don't under stand Ahab's question...line six. Very enjoyable otherwise. But how would the good 'ol captain know what the heck a movie is anyway? :)
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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He had Netflix of course! LOL Thanks for reviewing, Dennis
Comment from Poetic Friend
Great script. I enjoyed the dialogue and the characters. The twist at the end is cute and unexpected.
The script was so well-written that I did not realize there was a requirement as to the words that must be used in the script. You did a great job incorporating those words.
Good luck in the contest.
I enjoyed the script.
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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Great script. I enjoyed the dialogue and the characters. The twist at the end is cute and unexpected.
The script was so well-written that I did not realize there was a requirement as to the words that must be used in the script. You did a great job incorporating those words.
Good luck in the contest.
I enjoyed the script.
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2017
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"requirement as to the words that must be used in the script. You did a great job incorporating those words." Sorry, I don't know how you got that idea, as its not true. But thanks for the review and the sixer! Dennis
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I should have said the "plot", instead of "words."
