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Comment from nomi338
This is never more obvious than when two skunks get involved in making babies. I bet the funk rises high in the sky. One good thing about it, neither one is offended by the odor from the other. If a man exuded that kind of funk during love making, that would be his last time with that lady, on that you can be assured.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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This is never more obvious than when two skunks get involved in making babies. I bet the funk rises high in the sky. One good thing about it, neither one is offended by the odor from the other. If a man exuded that kind of funk during love making, that would be his last time with that lady, on that you can be assured.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Only one night stands. Maybe the skunks are on to something.
Comment from Possummagic
That's a really funny play on words Bill. I liked your skunks and I liked your rhyme. Pepsi La Phew springs to mind. I hope you have a fantastic weekend. PM
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That's a really funny play on words Bill. I liked your skunks and I liked your rhyme. Pepsi La Phew springs to mind. I hope you have a fantastic weekend. PM
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
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Thanks, PM
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Welcome.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Nice 5-7-5 Bill, with your usual sprinkling of humour thrown in for good measure.
Love the picture which accompanies for words beautifully.
Mitchell
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Nice 5-7-5 Bill, with your usual sprinkling of humour thrown in for good measure.
Love the picture which accompanies for words beautifully.
Mitchell
Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Mitchell.
Comment from Macsween
Very good. I really liked it. Nicely written with a comedic feel and written to your usual high standard. The picture is perfect. Pepe Le Pew was my favourite cartoon as a kid.
Living in the UK I've never seen or smelt a skunk, but my American family say it's horrible.
Good work. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Very good. I really liked it. Nicely written with a comedic feel and written to your usual high standard. The picture is perfect. Pepe Le Pew was my favourite cartoon as a kid.
Living in the UK I've never seen or smelt a skunk, but my American family say it's horrible.
Good work. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Mac, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from beizanten
A beautiful picture I still remember I saw it in cartoon. THe skunk fall in love with a cat whose tail had been paint white so it look like a skunk. A simple. short but well written poetry.
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A beautiful picture I still remember I saw it in cartoon. THe skunk fall in love with a cat whose tail had been paint white so it look like a skunk. A simple. short but well written poetry.
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Belize, for the nice review. Bill