Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written Lanturne poem you have penned for the contest. You used such great wording that had a very good message in them. Very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thank you, Teri, for the kind comments and good wishes. Craig

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Lanturne poem. When there is a wall to keep intruders out no one will want to leave or get out. Evrntually.inside the wall will be better and safer.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thanks for reading, Sandra. Time will tell, I guess. I'm grateful for your support in reviewing my work :) Craig

Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Donald Trump, who is determined to build a wall, needs to read this poem.

You spoke volumes with this poem in its brevity. Great usage of word economy.

Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thanks for the thoughtful review, much appreciated. Craig

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Perhaps it is the being "locked in" that certain Heads of State seek?

Well written poem that depicts this message spot on.

Should make an interesting entry into this contest.

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 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2017

Thanks so much for the kind comments. Craig