Thoughtful Poems and Prose
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Comment from lyenochka
Well done nonet! I like the pathos created by the rain which reflect the tears and sorrow in the loss of sight. Or perhaps it's the sorrow that cause the sightlessness.
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Well done nonet! I like the pathos created by the rain which reflect the tears and sorrow in the loss of sight. Or perhaps it's the sorrow that cause the sightlessness.
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Thank you.
Comment from loismddavis
you have fulfilled the requirements of the prompt--the greyness certainly reflected the subject of your very sad poem--you have conveyed the the sadness very well
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you have fulfilled the requirements of the prompt--the greyness certainly reflected the subject of your very sad poem--you have conveyed the the sadness very well
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
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Thank you.
