Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hey Bill. I can not believe we are already at number 9 in this series. Seems like these went by much faster than before. Loved the sing song rhyming scheme and how you put the words together to give us a smile. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017

Thanks, kiwi

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

I've run out of adjectives, Bill, and am finding it difficult to name a humorist, or comic, to rate near you. This is just a piece of nonsense, but it's good nonsense and that's not easy to accomplish!

Sorry I don't have a six for you, friend.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017

Thanks, Jay, for putting a positive spin on this one. Bill

Comment from damommy

Excellent

LOL LOL LOL

No, you didn't. You pulled it out with that humorous last stanza. I also liked that you admitted you used the cat part for rhyme. So funny!

Love the picture, too.

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017

Thanks, da, for going along with this. Bill

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

That is a stunning poem, is there any particular form?

I admired your well sustained 8/8/8/4 rhyming, you whit, whimsy, and your amazing talent. I don't believe I ever reviewed your work, but it's a blind contest, and I might have.

When flies arrive in groups of nine
intentions will not be benign
they may well form a conga line
...and who wants that?

Wow. I love this.

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017

Thanks, ytbard, for the positive review. Bill