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Comment from PoemsOfDD
Bill, this is an upbeat and playful poem you have written. Partying Mrs Fly at least had some fun before her ending her days and getting munched on by Mr Spider. Let's hope Mr Fly does not get caught in the web after his long rest. Thanks for sharing this fun read. ~DD
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Bill, this is an upbeat and playful poem you have written. Partying Mrs Fly at least had some fun before her ending her days and getting munched on by Mr Spider. Let's hope Mr Fly does not get caught in the web after his long rest. Thanks for sharing this fun read. ~DD
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Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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I personally hope that Mr. Fly keeps his lawn mowed.