A Thing of Beauty
Antonym Contest Entry11 total reviews
Comment from Sis Cat
Excellent antonym and description of the process of a grain of sand in a clam or an oyster becoming a pearl. As always with these poems, the definitions in the center binds the opposite words together with contrasts:
Sin or transgression can cause much pain and irritation
Covering it with love produces ultimate grace and beauty
You go further to talk about sin and the redemptive power of love.
Thank you for sharing your fine entry. I wish you success in the contest.
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Excellent antonym and description of the process of a grain of sand in a clam or an oyster becoming a pearl. As always with these poems, the definitions in the center binds the opposite words together with contrasts:
Sin or transgression can cause much pain and irritation
Covering it with love produces ultimate grace and beauty
You go further to talk about sin and the redemptive power of love.
Thank you for sharing your fine entry. I wish you success in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your insightful review. If only we would apply these words to our lives. The world would be a better place.