Comment from damommy

Excellent

Oh, lordy, no.

I know some humans that are just as bad about racking up. lol

This is so cute. Can you imagine him getting set for a shot? woo-hoo

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thanks, da, for giving this a shot.

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

You've penned this 5-7-5 well.
The last line, 'just don't let him rack'- It looks like he's going to be there a minute. You may have to help him up.
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the picture and color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

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 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thanks, Nicole, for breaking this down.

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Hahaha. Where do you find these fabulous pictures? This is a great one for the poem and I bet it would be a llloonnggg game too. LOL

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 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

This picture is from a site that takes sloth pictures.