2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "late winter snow"A collection of Japanese poetry
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, ma'am, I guess it happens to all of us. Or at least those of us who live long enough. Therefore, having white on top is a great sign of a long life. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Yes, ma'am, I guess it happens to all of us. Or at least those of us who live long enough. Therefore, having white on top is a great sign of a long life. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Comment from Hitcher
It is a shame you are not promoting these Gypsy. Your last one was a touch of class friend and this one is also refined and worthy of many reviews. You are on a roll !!
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It is a shame you are not promoting these Gypsy. Your last one was a touch of class friend and this one is also refined and worthy of many reviews. You are on a roll !!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review. I'm sorry I don't have money to promote. I appreciate your time.
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Comment from robyn corum
Gypsy,
You are on a roll, huh? I like the meaning and symbolism contained in this poem. The 'late winter snow' is a perfect metaphor for this time in life. And your words are stated perfectly to create a very cool image in my mind. Nice!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Gypsy,
You are on a roll, huh? I like the meaning and symbolism contained in this poem. The 'late winter snow' is a perfect metaphor for this time in life. And your words are stated perfectly to create a very cool image in my mind. Nice!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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thank you very much, Robyn :)
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Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think of the content is good and I like the alliteration it's very soft and smooth flowing throughout. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are an amazing and talented writer. With love, Lala
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think of the content is good and I like the alliteration it's very soft and smooth flowing throughout. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are an amazing and talented writer. With love, Lala
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
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thank you very much, Lala.
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Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Gypsy; thank you for sharing your haiku about snow. Within the limited lines and syllable count, you have given us a wonderful image and reflection. The picture you chose to compliment the piece works well.
~patty~
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Hi Gypsy; thank you for sharing your haiku about snow. Within the limited lines and syllable count, you have given us a wonderful image and reflection. The picture you chose to compliment the piece works well.
~patty~
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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thank you very much, Patty,
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