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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the saddest day for the foods of octopus under the deep sea, today octopi are holding a hug-fest and enjoying all types of their foods on hunt there are mourning; I liked.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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This speaks the saddest day for the foods of octopus under the deep sea, today octopi are holding a hug-fest and enjoying all types of their foods on hunt there are mourning; I liked.
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from Curly Girly
I'm not sure if this fits in with criteria for ACROSTIC poetry or not. However, it did make me think of squid rings.
Yum-yum!
Those giant 'O's got me thinking all about calamari.
Nicole
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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I'm not sure if this fits in with criteria for ACROSTIC poetry or not. However, it did make me think of squid rings.
Yum-yum!
Those giant 'O's got me thinking all about calamari.
Nicole
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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I'm not sure what it looks like on your end, but I sent this out with each letter on the left hand side spelling Octopus World 6, vertically. Happy day.
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Oh....now I see: Octopus World.
It's not clear.
I think you should put all the first letters in that dark purple font. To me, I just saw the 'O's and it read: 0006 (with one big O in the middle of the poem.)