Unwanted Dog
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Comment from robyn corum
Brett,
Clever use of the burning pile as your accompanying picture -- it even more vividly paints that mental picture of what that lashing must have been like. Bless your soul! This chapter was well written and though, not enjoyable in the least -- adds a lot to your story. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Brett,
Clever use of the burning pile as your accompanying picture -- it even more vividly paints that mental picture of what that lashing must have been like. Bless your soul! This chapter was well written and though, not enjoyable in the least -- adds a lot to your story. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
I used that picture because I wanted a fire to represent that experience. I believe that picture worked well to convey that image.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from bookishfabler
Of course, I have to know what comes next. Keep going.
Who are these two assholes holding down a young boy while this giant ass beat him with a strap. They should all go to jail and feel the same.
hugs HEidi
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Of course, I have to know what comes next. Keep going.
Who are these two assholes holding down a young boy while this giant ass beat him with a strap. They should all go to jail and feel the same.
hugs HEidi
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Three against one, nope, the odds weren't exactly even, were they?
Appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Sankey
I felt every hit with you mate. Nothing like yours but I still remember my first single caning to my hand in Grade 3. I wrote about that in my autobiography. Then the 11 hits one at a time in 5th Grade. He was a dumb teacher. No spags.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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I felt every hit with you mate. Nothing like yours but I still remember my first single caning to my hand in Grade 3. I wrote about that in my autobiography. Then the 11 hits one at a time in 5th Grade. He was a dumb teacher. No spags.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from gudbjorg
A very graphic story of how some people or in fact many people can be so cruel that they enjoy seeing others suffer and bleed. Your story is the epitome of this inhuman behaviour that exists in the world and you did a good job on describing it. In spite of it all in spite of the darkness it can newer overcome the Light. God's Love.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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A very graphic story of how some people or in fact many people can be so cruel that they enjoy seeing others suffer and bleed. Your story is the epitome of this inhuman behaviour that exists in the world and you did a good job on describing it. In spite of it all in spite of the darkness it can newer overcome the Light. God's Love.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Bill Schott
This is an important piece to the autobiography as it deals with your ability to divert pain into a resilient and resolute determination to never give into authority.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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This is an important piece to the autobiography as it deals with your ability to divert pain into a resilient and resolute determination to never give into authority.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Dear sir this is excellently written and I would not change a thing. As you said there are sometimes that words are not enough and yet are too much. "Battered and bruised" said it all
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Dear sir this is excellently written and I would not change a thing. As you said there are sometimes that words are not enough and yet are too much. "Battered and bruised" said it all
Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter. These heartless men should not be in any power position over children. There are limits to what is normal and outrageous disgusting punishment.
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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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A very well-written chapter. These heartless men should not be in any power position over children. There are limits to what is normal and outrageous disgusting punishment.
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thanks.
Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
WOW !!! I so wish I had a six for you
my first read you have penned I loved it
what a great read my friend and will be reading more
soon
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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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WOW !!! I so wish I had a six for you
my first read you have penned I loved it
what a great read my friend and will be reading more
soon
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Comment Written 11-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Appreciate your comments and support.
The thought of a six star is also appreciated.