Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hahaha.... I love your script. I love the name "Pepe" too. It's my father's name but that is not why I love it. I like the sound. It's also the name of the White Supremacist' s mascot, Pepe the Nazi frog.


Good job sweetie pie. I am sorry I'm out of sixes. This deserves it.

Luv ya

Gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017

Comment from nordicgirl

Exceptional

I really love your children`s stories,Michael. They are always great fun and I know kids would find them delightful. This little duck is adorable. I know you would NOT kill him. Hehehe. Please finish this one, okay? I am into it. NG

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

My dog would devour any flavor of Cesar dog food but duck.
Hope the old man knows the best way to cook duck is roast it
for about thirty minutes, basting with the juices. Seriously, I think this is exactly what the challenge was calling for.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017

Comment from damommy

Excellent

It will be hard to wait to see what happens to Pepe. I'm sure he got away.

Only children can hear him. I like that. Those adults young at heart can hear him, too.

You met the challenge very well, I think.

I'm waiting anxiously for the rest of the story. 8-)

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017

Comment from apky

Excellent

No livestock allowed(.),

Actions have consequences I read somewhere. I don't know what it means, but I sure have a lot of kids. Anyway ... school, you say. Yes, that would be the minnow pond just over the hill there. A fine school to my understanding. Many a young man attends there and older men too, brushing up I suppose.

I loved this - and as always marvel at your ability to make it so vivid.

Best,
Apky

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

You didn't kill the little duck, did you? I'm hoping that since Pepe knew what the cocking of a trigger meant, he ran!

Wonderful bit of fantasy. I loved the dialogue and the indignation of the little duck.

Looking forward to the continuation,

~patty~

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017

Hi, Patty

I'm terrible at answering reviews, but I HAD to answer you right away. LOL

NO, I didn't kill the little duck. To be honest, I can't kill ANY of my characters unless they're really awful. I wrote a short story one time that turned into a book because I couldn't bring myself to kill the main character. :))

Glad you enjoyed. Thanks so much for the kind words and all of your lovely reviews. I do read and appreciate all of them. :)) Mike

reply by Mustang Patty on 27-Jun-2017

thank you, Mike. I wondered about your replies - as in 'where were they?' But, now I know the answer to that question. I'm glad to know I won't have to read about the little duck dying - it would break my heart, as well as Howie and Bernie's. (Yes, I read all the poems, stories and scripts to them to get their opinions.)
~patty~

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Well I think it is safe to say there is no muddled fantasy.lol
What a different story and you still have to finish the last one, now you have two to do.lol
Nice one. love the names

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 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

I guess things are not right in the duck's world. But, Hell, things are not right in the real world either. Good luck in your contest. Very interesting story.

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 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017