Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

haha as they say 'don't look a gift horse in the moth.'

I enjoyed your poem. Good job on the syllable counts per line & the words for the picture. They made for a fun poem. Thanks for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017

Thanks, Jan, for excellent review. Bill