Unwanted Dog
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Shell Game"A short autobiography
17 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Hmmm... interesting that your conscience would tell you it was wrong to steal a can of Pepsi even though you were dying of thirst. Says a lot about the quality of the person beneath the tough-guy shell. :)
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Hmmm... interesting that your conscience would tell you it was wrong to steal a can of Pepsi even though you were dying of thirst. Says a lot about the quality of the person beneath the tough-guy shell. :)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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I knew it was wrong to steal that Pepsi, however, at the time I had no qualms about doing so.
Today, I would not even think about committing such an act, and if my 10-year-old son did ... well, all I can say is he best head for the hills as fast as he can get there!
More of my autobiography to come so I invite you to follow along.
Comment from Mustang Patty
this is once again, a very well written part of your story. I liked the part about the Pepsi and how you fooled 'the system.' My heart hurts for the little boy, but since I know you grew up into YOU, I can relax a bit,
~patty~
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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this is once again, a very well written part of your story. I liked the part about the Pepsi and how you fooled 'the system.' My heart hurts for the little boy, but since I know you grew up into YOU, I can relax a bit,
~patty~
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Glad you are enjoying my autobiography.
I went through some tough times. We all do.
However, for better or for worse, I seemed to survive them.
More of my autobiography to come so I invite you to follow along.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellently written and you make us sit right there and watch with the words you use. Makes us realize we, at some point, were you. Very well done and thank you for the sharing. Amazing
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Excellently written and you make us sit right there and watch with the words you use. Makes us realize we, at some point, were you. Very well done and thank you for the sharing. Amazing
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Glad you are enjoying my autobiography and all the support you provide.
More to come so I invite you to follow along.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about how adventurous the childhood days had been; author never cared to follow home rules, security and had been out by playing some tricks and committed nuisance outside; I liked.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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This speaks about how adventurous the childhood days had been; author never cared to follow home rules, security and had been out by playing some tricks and committed nuisance outside; I liked.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Sankey
Another great chapter, mate. Good reading and makes me wanna read a lot more as you get them on. Now some spags.
the area to [i](e)nsure my movements weren't observed
Black wom[e](a)n who attempted to purchase
Your picture comment....this chapter (so)well [so] I used it.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Another great chapter, mate. Good reading and makes me wanna read a lot more as you get them on. Now some spags.
the area to [i](e)nsure my movements weren't observed
Black wom[e](a)n who attempted to purchase
Your picture comment....this chapter (so)well [so] I used it.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it, review it, and catch the spags.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I was proud to see the only humans in the place were a dark-skinned Pakastanian behind the counter. Pakistani is the correct thing to call him. This sentence seems awkward as there is 'were' and then just one person listed. Maybe change to, "I saw a dark-skinned Pakistani behind the counter".
I'm sorry you lost your mother. My father died when I was eleven. I still struggle with that today.
An interesting story, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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I was proud to see the only humans in the place were a dark-skinned Pakastanian behind the counter. Pakistani is the correct thing to call him. This sentence seems awkward as there is 'were' and then just one person listed. Maybe change to, "I saw a dark-skinned Pakistani behind the counter".
I'm sorry you lost your mother. My father died when I was eleven. I still struggle with that today.
An interesting story, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Appreciate you catching the spag.
Have had many, many reviews from my autobiography so it has taken me a while to catch up.
Glad you enjoyed this portion of my life story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter. We all have done something out of the ordinary and very illegal one or other time. The difference some keep doing the wrong things and others turn away from what they learn is wrong.
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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A very well-written chapter. We all have done something out of the ordinary and very illegal one or other time. The difference some keep doing the wrong things and others turn away from what they learn is wrong.
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thanks.